Wishing my life at ease
knowing it isn’t near
wanting you to want me
knowing it wont work
living life with what i got
wanting more
having less
living hell
wanting heaven
having hope
losing faith
soaring life
to find a dead end.
Poem a friend wrote, any advice for her?
Posted by Admin on August 4th, 2010
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its really good , i mean there is nothing wrong with it , except a the end it just a list of stuff happening , maybe make it more interestin for the reader .